I'm finished with the first draft of my W.I.P. Whew! And Hooray! Now comes the tricky part--rewriting/proofreading/editing. This one has taken me longer than most, because Hubby and I remodeled our new condo while I was writing it (with not much writing going on.)
Recently, I posted an excerpt of one of my books on a Facebook page called Read Local Kansas City in an event called "Holiday Festival of Authors." The theme for the excerpts was Winter and Winter Holidays.
Each of the Psycho Cat and the Landlady Mysteries is set in a different season. Catastrophic Connections reveals a lovely Kansas City springtime and the beauty of the American Virgin Islands. Furtive Investigations is set during the winter, partly in Arizona and partly in Kansas City. Nine LifeFelines' mysterious events happen during the summer in Peru and Kansas City, and our sleuth and her family are Tailed from San Antonio, Texas during a colorful Kansas City fall.
The excerpt I posted is from Furtive Investigations:
Gray drizzly dusk arrived around Four-thirty on this January Saturday afternoon in Kansas City, and it was as dark and gloomy as a winter street in Dickens’s London by the time Clay and Janae stuffed their bags into the back seat of Janae’s little car and set off for their Plaza hotel. Tiny wet snowflakes glistened in the streetlights and in the glow of their headlights. Bare, black-silhouetted tree branches, shivering slightly in the chilly wind, and ghostly mansions, surrounded by their expansive obscured lawns, lined each side of Ward Parkway.
Clay kept his eyes on the road and both hands on the wheel as he maneuvered the slick streets, and Janae sat stiff and unmoving. They rode along in silence until Clay drove under the brightly lighted overhang at the entrance to the hotel.
“Whew. A port in a storm,” Clay said.
“Like landing in Oz after escaping a tornado,” Janae said.
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My essay "Slow Reader" has been published at WritersCircle.net. It's an essay about why I like dawdling over the written word.
The site, WRITERS AGAINST COVID-19, was originated to provide uplifting or humorous stories for people isolated or affected by the coronavirus. The distraction helps people cope.
I have another story on the site, "Still Waters," which is a humorous story based on a true event that happened to me and my husband when traveling in Europe in the 1990s.
Over the past few weeks, I have read advice about how to help combat racism and inequality. Most recommendations involve educating oneself about the minority experience by reading, asking questions, and listening with an open mind, rather than relying on prior-held beliefs.
Daily life for me includes writing mysteries. Using diverse characters in my books without resorting to tokenism or stereotype has always been my goal. But I haven’t experienced racism against myself or my family members, and I can’t live inside the skins of people of different ethnicities. Reading and listening to others must be my guide to creating true characters and scenes.
Sisters in Crime, a mystery writers’ organization, recently launched an initiative to give grants to minority-owned bookstores and to promote minority mystery authors during the next year. The Romance Writers of America had a blow-up after a Chinese-American writer tweeted that a fellow writer’s novel was a “raciest mess.” The novel depicts Asian characters with “slightly yellow” skin and “slanted almond eyes,” and 19th-century Chinese women as demure, quiet, and compliant. The criticized writer sued, and the Tweeter was ousted from the RWA. Members took sides, board members quit, and chapters went under. The organization is struggling to come back with new leadership and new policies to support racial minorities.
In view of reports like these, it seems not only individual writers, but whole organizations are contending with inclusivity in different ways. During a recent Zoom writing meeting, I asked how the authors in that group deal with diversity in their books. One said, “I don’t go there.” Another told about being upbraided by another author because, in one of her books, she wrote about the “black quarter” in 1900 Kansas City. Even though it was historically correct, she cut the scene from her story. Our author of international mysteries said she doesn’t mention ethnicities and leaves it to readers to visualize the appearance of her characters. All the authors agreed we should be careful not to use clichés and to have our work checked by people with the same ethnicities or race as the characters we are creating.
A historical romance author in my writing group, Theresa Hupp, says this on her blog: “As a writer of historical fiction, one of the issues I struggle with is how to portray interactions between characters of different races. I could ignore the topic by not having characters of different races in my novels, but I think part of the purpose of writing historical fiction is to show the time period of the novel in all its facets. Race has been an issue in American life since our earliest days.”
Authors must ask: How do we put ourselves in the shoes of other people who are older or younger; hold political opinions that make us cringe; are violent in ways we would never be; are of the opposite sex; hold different sexual orientations/interests; grew up in circumstances totally unlike our own; or are of different ethnicities? To avoid stereotypes, an author must do serious research that involves, like a method actor, learning enough to rely on an intimate knowledge of the subject to span the gap between his/her real life and someone else’s potentially very different one. One shouldn’t stereotype even minor characters—the street sweeper is a real person, not just a chance to insert a diverse character. Authors need to listen to the opinions of beta readers, just as movie studios rely on test audiences for feedback.
Author Mitali Perkins says, “It's best to avoid socially-constructed race words like African-American, Asian-American, etc. The descriptions of physical appearances probably indicate the ethnicity of your characters even if you weren't purposeful about it.” Also, she says, don’t use food metaphors to describe skin color. Historically, the consumption of coffee and cocoa depended on slavery. It’s not only a cliché, but also offensive to use those words to describe someone of color.
In my Psycho Cat and the Landlady Mysteries, the inspiration for my characters (as well as for the cat antics) came from people (and cats) I’ve known or read about. Any stereotypes are accidental. One of the main characters in Furtive Investigation is, like my nieces, part Philippian. In Nine Lifelines, there are individuals from France, Peru, and the Ukraine. On my travels, I’ve met the people and heard stories I used as inspiration. Tailed includes reference to Latin-American gangs. I admit to never meeting a gang member in person, but I was robbed by one and did my research to try to understand what drives them. Catastrophic Connections doesn’t refer to ethnic minorities, but part of it takes place in the American Virgin Islands. I travelled there several times to do research for the book.
Plato said, “Books give a soul to the universe, wings to the mind, flight to the imagination, and life to everything.” As an author, I want to write those books. As a reader, I want to read those books. A book that inaccurately describes people and ideas corrupts the soul, clips the wings, throws obstacles at the imagination, and misrepresents life. It doesn’t mean we can’t describe unjust situations in history, as long as we don’t infer the people in those circumstances deserved to be there because of their inherent natures.
How about you, reader? Have you read books that stereotype a race, a religious group, an age group, or another minority? How do you think authors should learn about people who are different from themselves before creating a character?
The klutzy landlady and the unpredictable cat work with a CSI agent, an irascible police detective, and some passionate young people to scare up an unscrupulous villain with links to an underground world of corruption, drugs, and murder.
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